I really liked this. The voices were especially great, and the idea was good.
To improve, I would try harder on the graphics. They don't look great.
And also, when the strange man first appears, the echo wasn't necessary.
Other than that, it was really good :)
Well done, CazmoV
Thanks you very much CazmoV, and thanks for the constructive criticism aswell...
I'll admit, my graphics need some work, but as I am fairly new to my new graphics tablet - I'll use that as the excuse...hehe
My reasoning for the echo at the beginning was to trick people into thinking the video was some sort of wierd pervy crap, but then I twisted it into something else and it was meant to surprise people...
But thanks mate, I'll take note
These are the types of flashes I'd like to make.
Twisted, sick and distorted. Awesome
Just wish it was longer.
And there was a big pause at one point, that wasn't good
I got lazy
but thank you
Once again, tutorial perfection
Dude, i love your useless tutorials. They're so funny
Hey, i got your PM, im glad to know some people actually support my animations!
Front page :D
Dude, I thought this was funny as hell!
I'm not sure whether you were really being serious about this being a tutorial.
Cos obviously, it doesn't really teach you anything...
But it was very funny and well put together. The music suited it perfectly :D
The only bad thing was the fact that the text went off to quickly =[
Favourited, should be front page :D
Sorry man, this isn't youtube.
I thought it was a good short, well synchronized punches.
But just because you had a preloader, a logo and you embedded it to flash doesn't make it a proper flash movie.
Really cool flash...
Loved the graphics...
Music suggestion :)
jeez thanks man this was my first submission I didn't expect a 8!
Awesome dude! Really funny idea...
However, I thought it would be better without the gunshot
Good work ;)
Dude, this was amazing.
I've never really been a fan of stick flashes, but this was different.
It was fun and original, a good length too :)
Good work dude, 5'd and favourited :)
Dude, please please god, finish it!
This has so much potential, it's amazing.
However, it is very short :(
Good good work :)
Thanks man, I might actually finish it haha, but Id have to take out things like when the book says happy mothers day.
This would have been an okay flash if only it had a high frame rate.
I read your commentary, so to change the frame rate
1. click the empty canvas
2. at the bottom it will say "frame rate"
3. type in your desired frame rate
thanks for the advice
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